 guitaroo
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 5:47 PM
I'm likin the vocals a lot.
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 kingo
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 5:47 PM
 Nice progression. Great vocals Mary! this is a creepy tune.
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 K3VIN
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 5:47 PM
oo very trippy, the music goes very well with the vocals, kinda creepy but also at the same time kinda arcade like  nice song though, sounds like some really good talent composed all in one song
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 BOWILLIE
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 6:01 PM
excellent..sweet vox mary..
cool production d.i.e.
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farfor44
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 6:03 PM
I like this very much Marys vocals are just superb shes also a very talented songwriter,if she wrote the lyrics..this is an excellent track.
 nice job Y U Tw
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 GTOriginal
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 6:07 PM
This is cool. Mary's voice is killer and so is the production on this one. You guys have a recognizeable style, this is excellent. Got a real hot side of death thing going on here.
Dig the synths and bass/beat too.
 
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WildasRapids
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 6:25 PM
awesome d.i.e. reminds me of dracula or a vampire movie. would be awesome in a movie.
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AgentMGD
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 6:37 PM
 had a cool Lestat video playing in my head during this song ...love the haunting vocals by leplume on the production
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litesenseative
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 7:18 PM
great song the vocals are very good.Although the one thing i personally would prefer would if the riff in the backround was more like umm with a a instrument like piano or clean guitar (or both) possibly with some weird effect or something, because the sort dance buzzing thing that plays the riffs doesnt match with the vocals because when it stops the song sounds better ( just my opinion). Overall though great song strangely catchy i liked it a lot
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theblacklodge
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 7:21 PM
Uncompromising is the word, and that is a virtue clearly present in this tune. The way the melody is uncompromisingly unsettling, how the little synth leads come and go, how the "like glue" vocal melody sits there amidst this little "world" makes this a tune that leaves its mark. The only thing I'd be a bit easier on are some of the synth sounds that almost become detracting as they appear and leave, after a while. It's a fine line, isn't it? The true hook, "pull me in" or whatever you'd call it remains the vocal melody, to that pounding beat.
And yes you do have a recogizable style here so far, which is something to take pride in too. The entire musical package has such a good way of underlining that certain side of the content of the lyrics, being omnious, dark. That's what I feel about that. Once again, the fine line I was talking about before may have been crossed a few times, but all in all this is a very good job.
As for Mary 
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hate9wicket
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 7:24 PM
When you guys said this was going to be a little
 , you weren't kidding, but this is explicit in so many ways, the way the intervals clash in ways that create friction in delicious ways, and the rhythms set such a groove with that umm, very imaginative 
background vocal.
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strum
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 7:26 PM
lovely start, that dumbeat just kicked in everything so well
really nice dark feeling as your main theme is... i love it
i LIKE that bass guitar
is it a guitar, or a synth playing for the most part... sounds like a guitar, with a whole lotta effects... it just suits this song sooo well, its not even funny how well it suits it
TWO THUMBSUP!
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hantu
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 8:10 PM
Wow this actually wasn't terrifying for onece... still got its dark side... but its more like the kool fun part of your dark gloomy ways 
This is quite a catchy tune this is .. the way is grooves or slides 
i wouldn't mind you turning the vox up just a tad.... but other than that this is a rather splended track.... good listen.
Thankyou
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shadowself
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 8:37 PM
this is creeeepy! I like it, though. I like the bass part, too. Some of the intervals between notes are unexpected and refreshing. keep it up!
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MeddlingIdiot
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 9:21 PM
its a fun song then you listen to the lyrics and think about what they might mean and its kinda creepy. very nice.
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 songbird
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 10:04 PM
 WOW!!! This is awesome
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billrhynes
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 10:58 PM
Boldness is power. But only when it's matched with superb talent and execution like this. Awesome.
Awesome and HOTTT.
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dsindel
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 11:44 PM
This is a great track!
The keyboard/synth work is very ominous and has a dark eerie, Carnivalesque feel to it and this seems like it could be featured in a dark/twisted cinematic scene of a Tim Burton movie...
Start shopping this stuff..!
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GeneHilbert
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 11:46 PM
Interesting piece.... Kewl...... did I hear "fucking forever"..... why Sif you lovely little minx. Vocals are very kewl - pitch & diction are right on.....
Produced and mixed well.... interesting arrangement, all parts performed well.
Very Well Done.....
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moam
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 12:29 AM
Haha  Kinky  Very dark and disturbing, my cup o' tea The lyrics were pretty messed up, I liked it!
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Distilled1
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 1:08 AM
 well some said theres some synth that needs to be changed, but I think maybe more and a re-mix ( more production )
so I leave you now as I  it and the touch I can taste
Thats all I can say as I go away to feed 
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 orgasmotron
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 1:32 AM
this sounds so big, i'm loving the sounds. nice moving drum beat, great synths, the bass sounds really good. i'm loving that bass tone, for real. sweet change-up at 1:25, this is rocking hard. great groove in this piece, i found myself head banging at 1:25 after working all day. props!
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Dizeazed
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 2:59 AM
I like the creepy synths. Trippy lil wah-wah effect on the vocals: Fits the atmosphere of the track very well. Those moans... Oh yea... always a nice.... "touch". 
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IndigoGirl
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 6:39 AM
I was listening to this with headphones, I'm not sure what the technical words are, but I loved the switching between channels. Kind of like an audio pendulum.
Love the synth and the drumbeat. The vocals were sweet as!
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 onewhodreams
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 11:36 AM
OK... this is good. I'm instantly taken back to one of my all-time favorite movies "Nightmare Before Christmas". I dunno why but it just reminds me of that musically. Now, onto lyrically . I totally love the extra added breaths in the chorus, that is SO SEXY! and the moaning... nice! "take me... with fingers and tongue"!!! Hehe... Great mix and panning fx and your voice sounds great.
Great job my little dark one. 
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thought-fox
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 12:15 PM
Very erotic and dark. Powerful stuff, you guys!
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Rodrica
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 12:51 PM
Love the arrangement!  Very dark, erotic and sensual. Sounds like the Devil  had a hand in writing this one! Great quality to the vocals, very well expressed. Outstanding job you guys!
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Intergalacti...
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 3:23 PM
Yeah I agree with with Rod, dark erotic and passionate. The vocals have a lot of emotion in them. That bass line is killer. I'd prefer to hear a live drum sound from this but it fits fine so dont worry about that.
Good job. You two make a great team
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aflunky
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 4:45 PM
EEEEOUCH!!! God DamN! I'ma go fuck my wife now!
Good job, Keep at it!
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LostYears
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 8:11 PM
love the bass and synth mix in this man.... good work
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 ShadowMom
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 12:19 AM
Killer bass...love it. It pulsates hypnotically...ummm...the lyrics are very sensual and graphic... and, ummm, don't bite me, DIE... You two are some scary people!!!
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dissymix
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 8:00 AM
ahhh dude this is awesome! Those vocals, for starters, are brilliant (esp. the naughty naughty lyrics  )
Great production work. Love the panning, which really opens the tune out. Cant get enough of dark tunes and you hit the nail on the head
Good work man, this owns 
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evansorchid
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 9:10 AM
Freaking Bizarre. This is like something from a dream  where my subconscious creates flashes  of memories from past anxieties. And, it isn't pretty.
Very cool vocals. The mood is like something slithering and writhing inbetween the cracks of insanity. 
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Notary04
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 10:31 AM
Yeah, that bass is amazing. Vocals are great. I feel all violated now, so I guess this track is a success
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NadaVanNie
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 10:46 AM
I like this track a little less then the previous one, although I think the female’s vocals are pretty strong (even a little more so than in the first track), but overall you guys accomplish the mood you describe about each song, so that is a very good thing.
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Da1DaOnlyCamay
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 11:10 AM
OH SH*T!!!!!!Mary you're vocals sent chills up and down my spine...I'm loving this track SOOOOOOO much. It's like I can visualize what the video would be like (I have an eye for such things). WOW, you guys are beautiful together what a dark blessing that you two could put your talents together in such a hellish way...keep up the good work!!!
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Ghostie
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 12:59 PM
very haunting vocals, and eerie music 
Exceptional
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from-a-box
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 2:05 PM
whoa. Think I may need a little 'break' after that one.  That's one erotic tune! Like the contrast between that dry guitar and the raspy synth when it comes back in - nice effect. The vocs are sensual as hell, of course. Nice job guys. shwew.
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JaccoGardner
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 5:22 PM
woah this is really awesome!! very well produced and just a very tight sound! you two did a GREAT job on this
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tsand19151
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 6:53 PM
wow...what an awesome production. sexy lyrics. perfect vocals. loving the synth sounds. the heavy breathing makes me horny (heck, anything makes me horny). must mention the mix as well. you two could be the most original team in DMusicVille. outstanding job, guys.....
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jimbobber1985
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Date: November 26, 2005 @ 6:11 AM
crazy, really ominous beat, original and just, well.... i dunno, feel like i need to make up a new word... erm.... horrortronic! yeh, horrortronic
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Traf
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Date: November 26, 2005 @ 8:29 AM
woh.. what a great intro..
I love your voice.. .. very dark and silky..
I really like instrumentation and the dark undertone..
Great sexy lyrics as well..
oooh.. love that ending..
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TheElf
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Date: November 26, 2005 @ 10:57 AM
Damn, that's a hot song. Great work, very cool
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litesenseative
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Date: November 26, 2005 @ 11:12 AM
Listen to the song again haha i take my previous comment about the synth back its great how it is 
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AbortiveMind
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Date: November 26, 2005 @ 12:38 PM
Oh Dear Satan Plumy, is that you moaning wow The lyrics and vocals are great!!!
Very nice arrangement, and indeed quite passionate 
This might be the next pornmovie soundtrack
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imemine
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Date: November 26, 2005 @ 6:05 PM
Quite creepy! The progression is dark yet inviting---damn vampires! Half steps to build tension. I have to say that this Mary’s best performance yet---that I’ve heard. Hmmmm, WHAT---forever? Gee’s guys, get a room! Production is excellent. Very---Uuuuu----nice---well if you can describe a song like this as nice.
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saetan
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Date: November 27, 2005 @ 4:06 AM
Oh right, I remember my initial thought again. Porno wah wah wikkitah! I watch many much things, but this is pretty graphic. Originally I didn't listen to this song because it is rated under "mature content." If my mom caught me listening to this, she'd probably catch me masterbating at the same time. I'd get my ass kicked and probably wouldn't see a tv in an eternity. Though I remembered I don't live with my mom so whatever and gave it a listen. Little did I know she was visiting and walked in while I was listening, and caught me giving myself a quick wank. Kinda embarassing but yea explained to her the situation over tea and then later in the day went and filmed a movie about leaves dancing around a waterfountain. Am I just straying from the topic at hand, I think so. So here goes, the bass line in this song is the motor in my opinion, its superb! The vocals are mixed very well, they sound great. Who propelled the idea of "touch" into "sex me up by a dumpster"? I dunno. However that is quite inventive, and thanks for sharing it. The stereo delay on the guitar is very effective when it shows up. Really all I have to say this is really an ear opener for the porn genre, but if you pay attention the bass line kinda humps in there. Over all the song is nicely done but I have to admit that I'm very distracted by the moaning. Is it just me? Who knows I'm talking to myself. Unfortunately this isn't something I'll blast on my speakers. Anywho what a risky business this music scene. Keep it up though!
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InsanitysMem...
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Date: November 28, 2005 @ 3:49 AM
I really like this. Very nice feel to this. Beat just pulses along. Vocals are almost a tease to the listener. Very dark song man. Love it.
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Britmick
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Date: November 28, 2005 @ 4:09 AM
Super bloody duper
Loved it.
Great bass line as well.
Brill.
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INoxx
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Date: November 28, 2005 @ 4:48 AM
yeah the bass rocks. The voice is cool cool stereo effects on it. Nice analogic synths. cool melody line (especially the catchy chorus)
It's a pity the drums are a bit repetitive (but well, it s so boring to program drums).
Anyway another nice dark song style. Congratulations
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 KirillGurtov...
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Date: November 28, 2005 @ 9:23 AM
I really dig those synths, usually they're used for bringing in those Emerson leads, but this sounds so evil this way. I really dig the atmosphere and the lyrics and vocals on this, great job!
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Firefly
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Date: November 28, 2005 @ 9:19 PM
hehe now the first thing that jumped out at me on this song with the effects on some of the vocals that drag the some of the words out into hisses. Very nice indeed. This song has great pacing to it as well. Very sensual and erotic.. I'm a little scared but quite enjoying it! Oh yes.
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Apertome
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Date: November 29, 2005 @ 3:34 PM
If this is what it's like to be damned in eternity, I'll take two!
I love the bassline ... solid synth lines as well. The beats get a little repetitive after a while.
I think Mary's vocals are improving a lot, everything is in tune and I think the delivery is getting better too. They were good before, but she's taking it to the next level now!
I like the moans and the freaky panning a lot. This is a very well-produced track.
I guess the only thing I'd say is I'd like to hear more acoustic instruments in here, the piano on the other track was very effective.
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JasonJSmoke
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Date: November 29, 2005 @ 4:41 PM
GREAT JOB!!!, Mary Great job, the bassline was pretty cool, a bit heavy at times, but good overall, the drum track was pretty cool, i liked the snare you used, keep 'em comin guys!
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pullmytrigger
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Date: November 29, 2005 @ 8:19 PM
THE BOMB DIGGITY! oh... lol great man!
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DamnedInEter...
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Date: November 30, 2005 @ 3:57 AM
Song file updated.
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WildasRapids
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Date: November 30, 2005 @ 4:22 AM
:clapping: Love it
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SimonWaldram
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Date: November 30, 2005 @ 5:17 AM
Great production on this one, that main synth line is awesome. I really like the bass line, too, it's very insistent but also really captivating, just like the vocals...and the vocals...Jesus Motherfucking H. Christ, I don't think anyone else could pull something like this off as well as Mary does. It's like being seduced by a very, very sexy vampire, you know that if you submit you'll surely be devoured, but how can you resist? Brilliant stuff.
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TameasDust
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Date: November 30, 2005 @ 8:50 PM
begins dark and stays there .... a gliding sesual love making episode ... a meeting of likes to blend in the passion of touch and taste ... reminds me somewhat of a different look at the song 'touch me feel me from tommy' ... nice passion ... well done
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 skynyrddude
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Date: November 30, 2005 @ 10:17 PM
this was very cool i like the beat and the vocals were killer
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EmoGurl
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Date: December 5, 2005 @ 7:58 PM
Mary your lyrics are just brilliant thats all i can say. I didnt much care for the mix in this one but i do think it went well with the song so i'll go half and half on this one  Very emotional deep preformance i think you two have done a great job with this.
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vilifiend
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Date: December 9, 2005 @ 9:48 AM
cool as fucking hell vocals, but ill be honest and say i did not like the instrumental aspects as much on this one.
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GTOriginal
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Date: December 9, 2005 @ 8:09 PM
 Revisiting. This is the hottest song on DMusic, not JUST because of the strong sexual content (I'd be lyin' & dyin' if I said that didn't play into it tho) but because of the whole damn thing. No reason for me to stream this one, it's on my MP3 player but I figured why deprive myself of commenting anyway?
Gary
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jess1561
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Date: April 11, 2006 @ 2:54 PM
You guys rock together! ...
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DrUmMeR-GuY
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Date: August 29, 2006 @ 6:19 PM
real keyboardy, Sweetness, i like it!
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